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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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That said it's very good for your first one. He's such a cute lil bugger.
I'm so sorry for the late reply! I haven't had the opportunity to check my deviant art lately but any critique or advise from a scatchboard artist would be much appreciated!
critique:
Nice work on those eyes, the way you did your scratching they have dimension and depth. Same thing with the stippling on the nose. You also caught that distinctive terrier face.
The fur texture does seem inconsistent though. The lower left has finer lines that build up, making a silky texture, much like a Yorkie. Where the fur everywhere else is rougher, clumpier, like that of one of the wire-haired breeds. Also the really short, wider lines on the top of the muzzle and the top of the head almost make the fur seem shaved. Thinner, possibly longer, and more evenly spaced lines that blended a bit more with the longer fur would fix that.
Overall I think you did a nice job and I hope you keep practicing.
Happy scratching!